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我在写essay..topic是 Janus-faced characters in Julius Caesar
关于Cassius的那一段,找不到合适的quote..
这段一半是我自己写的,后边一大段是tutor给加上去的,我总觉得有点跑题了,但她就一直写啊写啊也不给我解释,还超级不负责任的跟我说:我给你写的你爱用不用,自个儿爱怎么改就怎么改
Rather than honoring Brutus, Cassius manipulates him into committing an evil deed. Cassius manipulates Brutus with praise and compliments to boost his ego so that Brutus will turn against his soon to be King.
(然后这里需要quote..).The aforementioned quote proves that Cassius merely pretends to befriend Brutus, in order to seek his power and strength when murdering Caesar. Without Brutus’ help, Cassius is not guaranteed of Caesar’s death; By enabling Brutus to side with the conspirators, Cassius knows that Caesar’s death sentence have been signed as one of his most trustworthy nobleman is about to participate in the murder. Cassius’ display of moral disregard and lack of responsibility towards both Brutus and Caesar sparks a chain of events that only begins with Caesar’s unfortunate death.
有没有一个quote能证明 'Cassius merely pretends to befriend Brutus, in order to seek his power and strength when murdering Caesar.'??
tutor说要找长一点的quote,但是多长算合适呢??整整一段话会不会太长了??
这个网站上有这个Play的全文:
http://www.perseus.tufts.edu/cgi-bin/ptext?doc=Perseus%3Atext%3A1999.03.0027&query=head%3D%232求大家帮我想想吧ToT
以下是发牢骚:
这学期我怎么这么倒霉啊,敢上个不会教的老师..几乎学不到什么,班里气氛从来都超级差:( 8挂一下,据观察,此老师(中年妇女)总是偏向男同学,一切男生优先,fear and paranoia是她最爱聊的topic,做的最多的一件事就是complain,性别歧视和种族歧视以及individual歧视都表现得特别露骨,但嘴里总说"don't take it personally, you know I love you all in the same way"
请的tutor也挺差劲,比我以前的tutor差多了!!...一点都不负责任...上了几次课几乎什么都没学到!!最爱说的一句话就是:you do whatever you want to. I don't care. 我晕!!那我还找你干嘛啊!! $45加元1小时啊。。以前一个超级好的tutor才$30一小时....... 我要把她辞了````可是她是我们学校的ESL老师,我怎么开口啊????